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Sign-Up Date:
3/7/06

Level: 7
Aura: Light

Rank: Civilian
Blams: 8
Saves: 11
Rank #: 124,054

Whistle Status: Normal

Exp. Points: 520 / 550
Exp. Rank #: 73,874
Voting Pow.: 4.96 votes

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9 Reviews | 0 w/ Responses

Score: 7
Super Duper Mario??

"Good job!"

date: September 6, 2006

Hey man, this is REALLY good animation for someones first time, and It's a pretty good flash. Newgrounds can be very harsh on newbies. This does not deserve to be blammed! Don't get discouraged if it does, and I hope to see more of your work in the future!

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Score: 8
Keegan's Truck Rally

"Sweet"

date: September 2, 2006

Hey man, cool submission. I love the style, really original! This movie's underated. nice job!

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Score: 3
FD2 the massacre

"No plot!"

submission: FD2 the massacre
date: August 1, 2006

Ok, the animation was cool, but there is no PLOT! involve a plot and you can make something great.

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Score: 10
SuperAwesome Flash VOTE5!

"Great, just great"

date: August 1, 2006

Dude, that was amazing. I gave it a 5 because the score was sooo low. Nobody appreciates how much work actually gos into flash nowadays. The fact that it was in spanish made it twice as funny. The only drawback though was I was reading the text so I couldn't see your animation )*: I don't really know what you can do about that... but just letting you know.

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Score: 10
Doors 5000!

"AMAZING!"

submission: Doors 5000!
date: May 26, 2006

dude, that was the funniest newgrounds thing iv seen in a long time! Great jorb!

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Score: 6
Punch-Out Chapter Two

"It was OK"

date: April 23, 2006

Wow, I gotta tell you, I was expecting more. The music was sooooooo out of place. Also, since when is a massacre the brutal death of ONE person. I couldnt understand the final sentance because it was such a run on.
The story was lacking major parts a astory should have. I didnt see the other two movies, but each movie SHOULD be able to stand by itself. I think it would have been pretty sweet if you actually had voice actors. It was kind of stupid to read whats going on in the backorund. A truly good director would change cameras to the scene that it happened, instead of taking the easy way out and writing (in the backround). The whole thing was confusing.
I have to say though, I DID like the animation and the clever use of pixies. I give this a three, because it can be improved to greatness very easily.

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Score: 6
Gerkinmans Valentine

"I liked it"

date: April 3, 2006

This flash made me smile. Also, I liked how you incorperated the use of the best band ever. ( ;

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Score: 2
Amanda vs. Bin Laden

"This movie is ridiculous."

date: April 2, 2006

Why would you submitt something to newgrounds, and admit it was half assed??? This submission was ridiculous. You could, if you really wanted to make something great, involve a story line, and some soound (viewers always enjoy that). I hope you do make this into somethin, rather than let it sit here though. best of luck to you. ( ;

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Score: 5
Deep Thoughts - Killing

"I was good, but not great"

date: April 2, 2006

I found the movie pretty funny, but here are some things you can improve on.
-Break up the subtitles, so it isnt one giant mash and I can actually read them.
-The animation was pretty good, but I would suggest improving it
-I like how you turned an Idea into a flash, but lets face it, the idea wasn't really flash worthy in the first place.
Good luck in the future though.

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